美国大学申请Common App话题5Essay范文-Give Goth a Chance欣赏

美国大学申请common app话题5essay范文-give goth a chance

when i sat down to write this essay, i tried, as my high school english teacher always instructed, to imagine the audience for my writing. the more i thought about it, the more i pitied the college admissions screeners who would be reading a thousand essays on diversity. along with the expected takes on race and ethnicity, how many of those essays would present their authors as outcasts, loners, kids who didn’t fit in at his or her school? how could i present myself as someone unique and interesting—strange, even—without falling prey to the cliché of the self-pitying social misfit?

let me be direct: in some ways, i am the antithesis of what one might picture as a student who contributes to campus diversity. i am white, middle-class, and heterosexual; i have no physical handicaps or mental challenges apart from a tendency towards sarcasm. but when i receive college brochures picturing smiling, clean-cut teens dressed in the latest from abercrombie & fitch and lounging on a blanket in the sun, i think, those people are not like me.

simply put, i am a goth. i wear black, lots of it. i have piercings and ear gauges and tattoos. my hair, naturally the same sandy blonde that the rest of my family shares, is dyed jet, sometimes highlighted in streaks of purple or scarlet. i rarely smile, and i don’t do sun. if i were inserted into those brochure photographs of typical college students, i would look like a vampire stalking her wholesome prey.

again, i am imagining my reading audience, and i can almost see my readers’ eyes roll. so you’re a little weird, kid. how does that contribute to campus diversity? well, i think i contribute plenty. diversity goes beyond the physical; race or ethnicity might be the first things one thinks of, but really, it is a question of what makes someone the person that he or she is. diversity might be considered in terms of economic or geographical background, life experiences, religion, sexual orientation, and even personal interests and general outlook. in this respect, my goth identity contributes a perspective that is far different from the mainstream. being goth isn’t just about physical appearance; it’s a way of life that, like any other, includes not only individual tastes in music, literature, and popular culture, but also particular beliefs about philosophy, spirituality, and a range of other human issues.

to give just one specific example, i am planning to major in environmental studies, and while it might seem odd to picture a ghoulishly-dressed girl who adores the natural world, it was my goth outlook that led me to this academic interest. i read voraciously, and am drawn to subject matter that is somewhat dark; the more i read about humanity’s impact on the planet and the near-apocalyptic dangers posed by global climate change, pollution, overpopulation, the manipulation of the food supply and other environmental threats, the more interested i became, and the more determined that i should become involved. i, along with other members of my school’s environmental club, started a campus recycling program, and lobbied our superintendent to install in all classrooms power strips that are used to easily shut down equipment such as printers and computers at the end of the day, thereby conserving energy and generating significant savings for our school. i was drawn to this dark subject matter of environmental crisis, not to wallow in it or savor the schadenfreude, but to change it and make the world a better place.

i know goths look a little funny, as we wear our ebony trenchcoats in seventy-degree weather. i know we seem a little odd as we gather in shady nooks to discuss the latest episode of true blood. i know professors may sigh as we swell the enrollments of poetry and art classes. yes, we’re different. and we—i—have a lot to contribute.

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