Common Application本科转校Essay范文欣赏

发布时间:2014年07月16日 来源:毕达留学
毕达留学是一家以“录名校、做口碑”为理念的留学咨询机构,专注本科、硕士和博士等各阶段的海外名校申请。毕达注重个性化和透明化的申请服务,致力于申请者学术和职业素养的提升,帮助申请者从本质上提升竞争力并获名校录取。众多超预期的名校录取,是毕达打造以口碑传播为核心的基础。正因如此,每年都有众多学生以照片和视频形式为毕达留学公开代言。查看更多

 

  common application本科转校essay要求:please provide a statement (250 words minimum) that addresses your reasons for transferring and the objectives you hope to achieve.

  请用250字的篇幅说明你转校的理由以及你希望达到的一个目标。

  common application本科转校essay范文:

  based on the views i grew up with and the people in my life i looked up to, college is the key to a successful future. when it was time for me to apply to my desired colleges, i made sure i was prepared and had everything i needed to start the process. little did i know that there was more to my journey than being accepted into my desired college.

  my college admission process started very early and i was looking forward to every new day with anticipation. i constantly checked my email, mailbox and my cellphone to see if i had received any news. despite this, i noticed something that began to trouble me. of my peers, i was one of the few who did not hear anything from admissions. i was very nervous, and scheduled a meeting with my guidance counselor to see if there was anything i could do to improve my chances. actually, i found out that she had never sent out my transcript or my recommendation letters to any of my colleges!

  time was ticking and in haste i applied to the liberal arts program at (community college). i was perfectly fine going to (community college) but i started to miss out on actual college experience like dorming, social gatherings, actually having school pride and with my intended major being in theater, i decided to take the theater electives offered to me but they were not challenging. it seemed like i left each class with an even greater desire to study theater in a structured academic environment, and even more convinced that this college was not meeting my need. i soon came to the conclusion that i needed to leave; that this program was not for me.

  as i am becoming experienced with college life, i realize that i have been given the opportunity to meet and develop relationships with many people from different backgrounds. from my research, the(university of____) has a theater program that will keep me challenged with its academic programs. i feel i will have more knowledge of career opportunities and an opportunity to have a productive college experience thaat will carry into my career of theater.

  attending a community college also has helped me learn more of myself and what i want in my education. i look forward to giving and receiving the best from my next college. i want to transfer to a university that allows me to immerse myself in an environment that will expand my mind creatively and intellectually. my ability to adapt to new environments shows that i can make the best of my college years and opportunities.

 

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