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SAT写作范文assumptions and ideas

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下面为大家整理的是一篇关于设想和观念的SAT写作满分范文,这篇SAT写作范文的主要内容是讨论了人们是否有需要舍弃他们已经有的一些观念和对事物的看法。那就一起来看看这篇范文的详细内容吧。

Prompt:

The first problem for all of us is not to learn but to unlearn. We hold on to ideas that were accepted in the past, and we are afraid to give them up. Preconceptions about what is right or wrong, true or false, good or bad are embedded so deeply in our thinking that we honestly may not know that they are there. Whether it's women's role in society or the role of our country in the world, the old assumptions just don't work anymore. Adapted from Gloria Steinem, "A New Egalitarian Lifestyle"

Assignment:

Do people need to "unlearn," or reject, many of their assumptions and ideas?

Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.

Sample Essay

Throughout the long journey in which we know as life, one strives to grow with knowledge, and ultimately use that knowledge to enhance and improve their prospective in the world. It is truly a necessity of the educated mind to think and then doubt, and finally rethink. Many times one would need to reject, or “unlearn” what they knew from the past, and realize something new for the future. One can see that, this method of learn to unlearn can be show through the study of American history, the manifestation of the “hero’s journey” in classical stories, and perhaps most of all, our interaction with other people in society.

Ever since we were in grade school, misconceptions (or at least they are from today’s perspective) have been embedded in our minds. The great forefathers of our country were seen as great and god-like figures. Lincoln was the greatest advocate for emancipation, and our country’s government was the epitome of democracy. But after one has dived deep inside the past of American heritage, one realizes that Thomas Jefferson, John Adams, and other great politicians were just like the negatively viewed political today; they slandered opponents in elections and wrote pamphlets to get every advantage they could in order to win. Also, people often remember Abraham Lincoln as the one that freed the slaves and stood for equality. It is time he declared the Emancipation proclamation, but history tells us that the civil war was declared not for the freedom of the slaves, but for the unification of America. Lincoln wanted the slaves gone, just not in the North. Finally, America is seen as a great democracy, but in fact it is instead a republic, in which representatives

Secondly, the hero’s journey show in great classical plays such as Gilgamesh, the Odyssey, and others exemplify the idea that new ideas most be accepted while old ones are forgotten. In the process the “hero” or protagonist goes through a journey in which he finally finds enlightenment from the darkness he has been living, and reaches grasp of new ideas and things. For example the arrogance of Gilgamesh ensued his downfall, and ultimately Gilgamesh realizes his whole life of the perception of his power was not as strong as he expected. Also Odysseus realizes the hubris he had possessed and changed his way of treating the gods, finally making way back to his kingdom.

What perhaps is the largest example is that one sees in everyday life. As the adage goes, “you can’t tell a book by its cover”, just because one’s first impression of a fellow student, counselor, or acquaintance was negative, it does not mean the person is evil or unfriendly. Often in schools some kinds are teased for the way they look but when one really meets them, they are nice after all.

As Gloria Steinem said, we often really do hold ideas that were accepted in the past, and are afraid to give them up but it is ultimately our responsibility to learn from the past, and then rethink, and progress into the future. That is the formula of life.

以上就是这篇SAT写作满分范文的全部内容,非常详细,包括了Prompt和Assignment两个部分,范文的主体也引用了很多的例子。大家在备考相关的SAT写作话题的时候,可以适当的参考和借鉴一下。

 

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