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下面为大家推荐一篇SAT写作满分范文。
Prompt:
Many people believe that our government should do more to solve our problems. After all,
how can one individual create more jobs or make roads safer or improve the schools or
help to provide any of the other benefits that we have come to enjoy? And yet expecting
that the government—rather than individuals—should always come up with the solutions
to society's ills may have made us less self-reliant, undermining our independence and
self-sufficiency.
Assignment:
Should people take more responsibility for solving problems that affect their communities
or the nation in general? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view
on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading,
studies, experience, or observation.
Sample Essay - Score of 6
Though America has suffered through times of massive economic distress where government
intervention was necessary in maintaining the people’s spirit, America was founded by
individuals at town meetings, behind their ploughs, or in peaceful petition. In today’s relatively
stable society, people should feel empowered to make changes and solve problems because
countless reforms began at the grassroots level. If people need inspiration or proof, they need
only to look to the progressives or the Steimetz twins, who rid the beaches of cigarette butts
with their activism.
In the early 1900’s, American government had been congealed into a state of corruption and
inaction by the powerful lobbyists of the industries. In this Gilded Age, the disparity between
rich and poor were astonishing—while Vanderbilt became a millionaire, millions of factory
workers—mostly immigrants—lived in squalor and ate insalubrious food. At this same time, the
progressive movement sought to rectify these injustices. Jane Addams, for example, started
a settlement house for women workers, where she not only provided child care and financial
support, but also campaigned for the abolition of child labor and the creation of laws to protect
workers’ safety. The actions of hundreds of others like her eventuly led to reforms in city
government—the referendum, the city council ran by experts, not lobbyists, etc. All these reforms
originated at the movement of the individual.
However, movement by individuals does not have to spread nationwide to be effective.
In the state of Connecticut, two teenagers who passionately cared for the environment
effected state laws to make littering of cigarette butts illegal on beaches. The teens began with
simple cleanup campaigns with friends and family but realized that more action could—and should—be taken. Thence, they began to make trips to state legislature in addition to trips to the beach—instead of collecting butts, they rallied support. Eventually, a law was passed to make their
sentiments permanent—however, the impetus started in the minds of two teenagers.
Government is powerful and well-intentioned, but the sordid mechanics of politics often obstruct problem
solving. Individuals, however, are not so hampered. In a country where rights not
enumerated (explicitly given to the federal gov’t) are for the people, people should see
individual action as a right AND responsibility.
以上就一篇SAT写作的满分作文,大家可以参考他的写作手法跟用词。
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